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I'm really unsure about this one. It read like an anarchist fanfic which I wasn't really expecting, but the characters had great potential. It was refreshing to have such a diverse range of characters, instead of just a token LGBTQ+ couple.I was honestly sucked in at first with the first few paragraphs, but that pacing dropped off quickly. I think the story overall would be improved by either being a more concise short story, or a longer novel with more character development.It's not a long one so I doubt you'd be disappointed if you read it.
January 30th 2026