Avis
This isn't going to be a very in-depth review, I just want to point out some things that nagged me about this book.First off, Mary SueAnn. I hate this character. This is the most Mary Sue-ish character I've ever read about. Everything about her is perfect, everyone loves her, she can do no wrong, she only looks out for others... ugh. Everyone has flaws. Give her some.I almost choked myself every time her and Riley were together. Most of it is admiring his body, or his face, or something physical about him. She almost never describes the inside of him, just the outside.This was such an awkward book. Either it was sloooooooooow, or it was so action packed that even the action seemed boring because there was nothing exciting about it anymore. It had been going on for so long that it was just normal. But then it got slow again, then more action, slow, action. There was never any in-between. Victoria may be the best character in this book. I loved watching Aden try to get her to show emotions. At first I was pissed, because it was like he loved her but he was just trying to change her. But then I realized that he was only doing it for her own good, and that was a pretty awesome thing to do.Intertwined, I loved. [b:Unraveled|7696564|Unraveled (Intertwined, #2)|Gena Showalter|http://photo.goodreads.com/books/1324267566s/7696564.jpg|6967602], not so much. I was debating whether to give it 2 star or 3, but I chose three because overall I sorta liked it. Let's hope [b:Twisted|123106|Twisted|Laurie Halse Anderson|http://photo.goodreads.com/books/1171848225s/123106.jpg|2019821] is way better!