Reviews
I'm disappointed. Here are the three key things that kill this book. One, a lack of care. This author clearly has no concern for this title. It's shallow, stilted, and poorly written. Two, a desperate need for proper editing. How did this make it into publishing? I guess it's who you know. And three, a cool blurb and concept on paper does not innately make a good book; it needs connection, which this title severely lacks.From the very first chapter you are constantly bombarded by disconnected and incomplete thoughts and imagery. I realize this sounds harsh, but there wasn't a single chapter that had a complete thought from start to finish, and when you take the chapters and put them side by side the disconnect only multiplies.You are left constantly confused because your imagination may be painting one picture only for it to be shattered when it changes in the next moment. Often the author will begin a thought or description and then just move on. It would not surprise me if the author had AI write the story and she came in behind it to "fix" or "rewrite."It's disappointing. I was excited for a new Greek mythology adventure. I was thrilled for a new Academic story. I was hoping for intrigue, drama, excitement, comedy, and whimsy. Here, Tracy Wolff delivers all of the right things in the wrong way. Comedy in the illogical absurdity of this story. Whimsy, excitement, and intrigue in never knowing what disconnected thought you will be left with next. And drama solely your own, as the reader, when you become lost for the tenth time thinking, "Wait, what?" or "What now?"Thanks Tracy. As a first time reader of your books I have been sufficiently warned.